Nanowrimo begins!

Well, it’s day 4 of Nanowrimo and so far I’ve written every day – though I’ll admit that my initially impressive word count has begun to slip a little bit. My first drafts are relatively lazy and impatient creatures. I think this is because I’m working from an outline and because I am a lazy and impatient creature. The transitions are inelegant and the voice is uncertain, but I’m eagerly moving from one scene to the next, no time to stop and take care of things like rambling dialogue or description or any of that. But I think that shows I have some momentum moving me forward. All of the other details are things I usually fill in during revision.

I’m really enjoying the excitement of writing a brand new draft of a brand new thing. It’s making me think about other projects that I’ve let languish, untouched, for months – I wonder if I could turn this same bang-it-out-fast approach to them, and then have something to work with, to revise? This thought (along with having a Gogol Bordello song in my head) kept me wide awake last night. My enthusiasm for this whole first draft business will wane in a week or so, but at the moment it is invigorating.

So – how are my fellow Nanowrimo-ers out there fairing thus far?

Published in: on November 5, 2009 at 3:56 am Leave a Comment

your favorite halloween costume?

I vacillated from year to year between wanting to be pretty and wanting to be ghoulish. My Bride of Frankenstein costume (from age 12, I think) is one I would like to reprise one day – though I don’t know how my sister Susan managed to do my hair. It was amazing. Unfortunately I have no photos handy, so you get pink princess instead.

So, how are you all dressing up out there? I’m planning to scrounge around my house gathering random items which I hope, when assembled, will resemble a flapper costume. Then on Sunday, fueled by leftover Halloween candy, I plan to sit at my computer and start noveling!

Speaking of noveling…I’m tempted to get one of those little netbooks, so I can take it with me to work. My laptop is portable, but not throw-it-in-my-bag-everyday portable. And it’s getting old and needs a new battery. If you have any opinions on what netbooks I should look at, let me know. I’m sure that you’re all far more tech savvy than I am!

halloween pink princess

Published in: on October 31, 2009 at 4:54 pm Comments (1)

How I (over)prepare for Nanowrimo

I have a substantial commute to and from work every day, and I spend the time either reading or scribbling in my notebook. The scribbling often consists of lots of questions and not necessarily any answers. When I’ve got enough, I type up these scribbles so I can see if they fit together. Next I create an outline, a sort of loose map to follow, scene to scene, through the beginning of my book, inserting pertinent notes here and there.

This is what I’ve done for this nebulous new project I plan to work on for Nanowrimo. But at the moment I’m doubting my overly controlling outlining method of book-writing – at least for this first, rough draft. Now this book is a slightly more known-commodity: a list of bullet points on a formerly blank page. While usually that’s quite comforting, I worry that I’m squashing all the fun and spontaneity out of this project with my urge to make it seem book-like from the get-go, before I’ve even started writing the thing. What about just writing, allowing the characters to develop and see what happens? That sounds sort of exciting.

So I’ve quit outlining and note-taking. I think I’ll be glad of the map when I sit down and write, but there are still a lot of questions that need answering. Maybe that’s a good thing, and it will inspire something fresh and new to come out when I actually sit down to write on November 1. This Sunday!

Two more lovely blog reviews:
http://knightreader.wordpress.com/2009/10/17/the-kings-rose/

http://www.devourerofbooks.com/2009/10/the-kings-rose-book-review/

I love that the internet is filled with readers, blogging about what they’ve read!

Published in: on October 28, 2009 at 2:55 pm Leave a Comment

Boston Book Festival 2009

copley at bbfThis Saturday I attended the first annual Boston Book Festival. There were a series of events with a huge variety of authors talking about their books, as well as about writing, publishing, online promotion, and all sorts of other literature-related stuff. All of the daytime events were free of charge, and there were tents set up in Copley Square where publishers, literary journals, newspapers and local organizations (like the wonderful Grub Street Inc.) set up their wares. As if a day spent talking about books with fellow book-lovers wasn’t enough, Brigham’s was giving out free samples of Paul Revere’s Rocky Ride ice cream (yum!) and Legal Seafoods was giving away free chowder.

The day was absolutely wonderful, and I’m thrilled that Boston finally has an annual book festival – this state is so packed with writers it seems crazy not to have one. In spite of the rainy weather there still seemed to be a good turnout. My only critique is that, while the work of adult and children’s authors were celebrated throughout the day, young adult fiction was sorely overlooked. Here’s hoping they remedy this at next year’s festival.

bpl statueSome of my favorite talks included a discussion with John Hodgman (otherwise known as PC from the Mac commercials) author of a book of fake trivia, The Areas of My Expertise and Tom Perotta who wrote the novels Election and Little Children, among others. These two were hilarious. I also loved hearing R. Sikoryak talk about his book, Masterpiece Comics, a compilation of his comics of literary classics. His stuff was amazing and if you like comics (or classics, for that matter) I encourage you to check it out: http://www.rsikoryak.com/index.html.

bpl at bbfThe last session I attended was “Writer Idol” for which writers were invited to submit the first 250 words of an unpublished work. The submissions were then read (anonymously) by an actress and a panel of four agents (including mine, as it happens) raised their hands to indicate when they would have stopped reading the submission. I thought the agents did a great job of being honest and helpful in their critique. Agents get inundated with so many submissions, you really have to hook them! Here were some useful ideas I picked up from their critiques (and yes, I’ve totally made at least one of these mistakes, without a doubt):

  • Beware of being too stuck in your main character’s head in the opening (“I thought this…then I thought that…then I wondered…”). It can feel very claustrophobic for the reader.
  • Avoid having your character look in a mirror and describe what she sees. This is too common and there are other, unique ways to share these details.
  • Avoid too-vivid descriptions of bodily functions – especially in your opening.

While these sound really basic, I think they are useful. There are an awfully lot of things to keep in mind when writing a book – but it’s such a worthwhile endeavor, and the Book Festival was a great way to celebrate literature.

Published in: on October 26, 2009 at 12:45 am Comments (1)

Nothing Like You by Lauren Strasnick – now released!

I’ve mentioned my friend Lauren to you before – it’s time you met her, officially, as a published author. Her debut is a young adult novel, Nothing Like You, published by Simon Pulse. I urge you to check this book out, and not simply because Lauren is one of my oldest and dearest friends, but because it is a beautifully written and crafted novel.

nothing like you book coverLauren and I first met in writing class at Emerson College taught by Prof. Stuart Kelban, one of my favorite writing profs. (This was also where I met my friend Lesley Jenike, whose second volume of poetry, Ghost of Fashion, has been published.) Lauren and I didn’t really become friends in class, though we did admire each other’s writing. The following year we were living in the Netherlands in Emerson’s abroad program. And – poof – we were kindred spirits, heading to Prague together for a long weekend. Since then we’ve connected and understood each other not only as friends, but as writers.

me and Lauren in ItalyWriting is a solitary endeavor, so it means a lot to me to have Lauren in my life – someone who not only listens, but understands my writing woes. We writers – not to mention friends – need to stick together. I’m so glad that we have. Lauren lives in L.A., but we still communicate by email frequently every week. Now she’s got her own book on the shelf and I couldn’t be more proud. Congratulations, darling!

For more information about Lauren’s book, visit www.laurenstrasnick.com.

Published in: on October 21, 2009 at 12:52 pm Leave a Comment

Abou Ben Adhem

Today I thought I would post something in Dad’s honor. Here’s one of his favorite poems:

Abou Ben Adhem

Abou Ben Adhem (may his tribe increase!)
Awoke one night from a deep dream of peace,
And saw, within the moonlight in his room,
Making it rich, and like a lily in bloom,
An Angel writing in a book of gold:

Exceeding peace had made Ben Adhem bold,
And to the Presence in the room he said,
“What writest thou?” The Vision raised its head,
And with a look made of all sweet accord
Answered, “The names of those who love the Lord.”

“And is mine one?” said Abou. “Nay, not so,”
Replied the Angel. Abou spoke more low,
But cheerily still; and said, “I pray thee, then,
Write me as one who loves his fellow men.”

The Angel wrote, and vanished. The next night
It came again with a great wakening light,
And showed the names whom love of God had blessed,
And, lo! Ben Adhem’s name led all the rest!

James Leigh Hunt

Published in: on October 19, 2009 at 6:59 pm Leave a Comment

nanowrimo beckons…

After struggling with revising a work in progress, I fantasize about starting fresh with an idea, a new character, a blank page, and seeing where these new elements take me. Mind you, I’m a fickle creature – after a few weeks with said “fresh elements” I’ll be yearning to have a completed draft to cut to pieces and try to fix.

That said, I have signed up for my very first National Novel Writing Month this November. I’ve never officially signed up before so it’s exciting, and I hear that all who participate receive emails of encouragement from different authors throughout the month. Ironically, I dispense a lot of well-meaning advice about writing, but I don’t always manage to follow it. I’m not quite sure what I’ll write about, but I’ve heard that the uncertainty is all a part of the fun. It’s certainly not my usual way of writing a draft. I usually plan things out in a pretty control-freakish manner. So this is a new experiment!

I’m considering giving myself another option (a cheat, I’ll admit): if I hit a wall, then I can start a new draft of a new idea – just as long as I write 200 pages, total. I know myself – if I keep writing through the wall, the words that tumble out will be destined for the rubbish bin. Been there, done that. Or maybe my goal will be to write a full draft, from beginning to end, regardless of page count? What do you think, am I being too cynical and not fully embracing the spirit of this writing month? Experienced Nanowrimo winners, please comment!

I love this review – thank you fashion piranha!: http://fashion-piranha.livejournal.com/83125.html

Published in: on October 18, 2009 at 7:53 pm Comments (5)

singin’ and swingin’ and gettin’ spooky like halloween

My sister Valerie and I were in Salem the other day. Rest assured, Halloween has already descended, black-caped and red-eyed, upon Witch City. It’s sharpening it’s teeth upon the souls there before spreading to the masses later this month.

me and ValWe wandered around the Bizarre Bazaar, where I’ve had a booth up selling books in the past. I was a little sad not to be among the sellers this year – maybe in the future I’ll set up shop there again. Still, it was nice to be able to wander this time instead of being locked in a booth.

church in Salem

We visited lots of booths and little witch shops, where you can pick up your witch supplies. It’s interesting to see how all forms of witchery intersect at this juncture: the history of the terrifying witchcraft trials, shops that carry magic wands a la Harry Potter alongside the more authentically pagan items (herbs and candles and spell books, oh my!), and teenagers pouring out of the doors of “Dracula’s Castle” or “Frankenstein’s Laboratory” screaming their heads off. Not to mention the Bewitched statue in the middle of town…which doesn’t really bear mentioning.

Come nightfall, one does notice a change in the atmosphere.

bloody bride

It all made me want to reread Dracula, or any other of the million vampire/werewolf/ghost books that I’ve had on my reading list. I’m not one for the haunted houses where ghoulies pop out and startle you, but to be in the comfort of your own home and deliciously frightened by a book or a movie – preferably about a terror far outside the realm of our reality – that is more my speed.

Speaking of books, I also visited the Derby Square Bookstore, a towering cave of books.

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I also have a review to share! After my week of writing challenges, reading this review was like…drinking the nectar of the gods. No, seriously:
http://theroyalreviews.blogspot.com/2009/10/kings-rose-by-alisa-m-libby.html.bookstore 3

Published in: on October 12, 2009 at 10:02 pm Leave a Comment

Revisionitis

I’ve been at home tinkering with my work-in-progress this week, and it hasn’t been without incident.

On Wednesday my computer froze. In horror, I realized I had never plugged in my flashdrive to back up my work. I yelled at the computer, which really didn’t help (Roxanne quietly left the room at this point, leaving me to my hysteria). Luckily, I called my dear technologically-adept friends at Simmons, who offered calm and sage advice. In the end I didn’t lose too much, thanks to the autosave feature.

Wednesday was a low point. All books have that moment – usually more than one – where I wonder: Will this book just not work? I like to think that writing is the one way that I can use my tendencies toward obsession for good instead of evil. But if I can’t write another book, then what will I do with myself? I’m sure that other writers out there know what I’m talking about.

Thursday, I sat at my desk hoping to have a fresh perspective on this project. I was scrolling through my draft when – wala – gibberish! And I don’t mean the “holy moses I can’t believe I wrote this” kind of gibberish, but actual gibberish: at least a page of my book had transformed into a series of tiny squares and symbols. I managed to retrieve the text from a previously saved document, thankfully. I immediately resaved it, backed it up, and printed it all out, for fear of losing anything else. I ran out of paper more than halfway through and all I could find was an old ream of oversized legal paper that I cut down to fit into the printer. Luckily I managed to keep my act together: I had used up all my yelling and over-reacting the day before. And – thanks again to my friends at Simmons – I was turned onto this free downloadable program that works a lot like Word: http://www.openoffice.org/. I was able to use this yesterday and (knock on wood) the document was gibberish-free.

I hate to admit it, but writing is not always fun. Sometimes its difficult and challenging and you’ll probably feel like you’re no good. But if it’s something you want to do, something you’re compelled and driven and determined to do, then do it. Work through the fear and the worry. Bulldoze it.

Oh – and back up your stuff regularly. Sage advice from the one-eyed wonder basset.

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Published in: on October 10, 2009 at 4:32 pm Leave a Comment

beacon street is mighty pretty

I’ve just returned from a little family vacation: a couple days in Boston and then a couple days in New Hampshire. It was nice to get the chance to show our little city to Roy and Hazel, whom we visited in England a couple years ago. We took a walk through the public gardens, and later we walked down Beacon Street and saw my old dorm (which is now an apartment building):

Beacon Street dorm

And the former Governor’s mansion, which is now also the former Emerson Library, where Tom worked when we were in school. It had a beautiful reading room:

old Emerson libraryNew Hampshire is absolutely stunning at this time of year – peak foliage season. We had a little river rushing by our back deck; we would have spent more time out there enjoying the view if only it weren’t so chilly.

NH deck view of riverIt could be a nice place for a little writer’s retreat, I think. As long as we brought some very, very warm clothes and figured out some way to make tea. I find views like this lovely and inspiring, but I don’t know if it’s really conducive to getting work done. I admitted to someone (another creative soul) that my ideal work space is pretty much a windowless cave, and she tilted her head and peered at me in that curious, my-you-are-a-strange-one sort of way. But there it is.

Before I post more New Hampshire photos, I have some links to share!

Thank you, Ashley, for this wonderful review of The King’s Rose:
http://ashley-thecompulsivereader.blogspot.com/2009/10/kings-rose.html. Ashley’s review was also posted on teenreadstoo.com: http://www.teensreadtoo.com/KingsRose.html.

A great review from The Book Girl, too:
http://thebookgirlreviews.blogspot.com/2009/09/guest-review-kings-rose-by-alisa-m.html

I have a guest post on the Shady Glade, where I share how much I love to write about BAD GIRLS:
http://theshadyglade.blogspot.com/2009/09/author-guest-post-alisa-libby.html.

Also fellow kudos to JonArno Lawson who has a book hot off the press – and it looks really cool, to boot: http://www.greenboathouse.com/books/index.html#TWT

Published in: on October 5, 2009 at 2:22 pm Leave a Comment